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~Lonely in Love~

Giving it all to get nothing back
This love is draining me of everything that I used to have.
Is this even considered love?
I'm not heartless, so why can't you tell that I need you?
I'm not emotionless, so why won't you be with me today?
WHat is your problem and why can't you see that
This lack of attention is killing me.
More painful than any physical feeling
These emotions send me reeling,
And as I'm heading for the floor
I feel the pain even more.
Why can't you see that I need you?
Why don't you understand.
I tell you, I talk to you,
But all of my pleas fall on deaf ears.
I'm miserable,
But you're so happy.
Why can't you see that I'm dying?
I'm lonely with or without you
I don't know anything about you.
You never seem to let me in,
And I can't fight anymore my friend.
Let me go.
I don't want to be lonely in love anymore.
©2006-2009 ~Shanti-Pyaar
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Author's Comments

Yes, this poem is about those who give all they have to the one that they love, but feel like they get nothing back in return.

~Shanti Pyaar :floating:

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I know that feeling- you have expressed it here very well :hug:
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Thank you for the compliment and the wonderful hug! :D
Being lonely when you're in love- it's a feeling that none of us should have to go through. I think it helps to tell people through artistic means though because it kind of lets them know they're not alone. Have a great day.

~Shanti Pyaar :floating:

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~God is my Hero.~
"Do good, O LORD, unto those that be good, and to them that are upright in their hearts. " ps. 125:4
"When Satan reminds you of your past, remind him of his future."
Love is what I give you, And peace is what I wish you. ~Shanti Pyaar
:iconcmb24:
That is so very true. Thank you, have a great day yourself :D
:iconbong91:
i have now this feeling, and your poem says everything, its so true, all your words, thanks a lot for doing this
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I am honored that you liked it. I tend to write to let people know that they are not alone, and I know how hard it is to be alive sometimes. Thank you for the comment and may you find life and light and peace in your life.

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~God is my Hero.~
"Do good, O LORD, unto those that be good, and to them that are upright in their hearts. " ps. 125:4
"When Satan reminds you of your past, remind him of his future."
Love is what I give you, And peace is what I wish you. ~Shanti Pyaar

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